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Memo Writing

A routine part of the daily work of an engineer involves communication with other people working for the company. Letters, memos, and email are the most common forms for written communication. The memo is used within the company for a variety of purposes. A memo might be sent to make a request, set up a meeting, confirm a conversation, summarize a report, note the status of work on a project, and otherwise contribute to the day-to-day business of the organization. Memos are fairly formal and always become a permanent record. Each company will have a specific form to use for memos, but they typically look much like the example on this page. Email may be replacing the memo in many instances, but the memo is still an important form of communication.

There are two types of memos that will be written for the class:


Summary/Analysis Memo

Imagine that a document arrives at the engineering firm where you work. Your supervisor forwards the document to you with a request for you to read and comment. Since the supervisor hasn't read the document first, your response has to include a summary of the document. Then an analysis of the document and your recommended action is required. This is a fairly common task, especially for new engineers who need to demonstrate knowledge about matters relating to the company's interests and confidence in their ability to draw conclusions.

Here is what you have to do: After Joel Arthur Barker's Defining a Paradigm is read and discussed, you'll be asked to find an article in the engineering literature that connects to concepts you read about in Barker. You'll then need to write a memo to your supervisor (the class instructor). Start with a brief introduction. Then summarize the article, analyze the article using at least three references to Barker and conclude with a recommended action. The assignment will take one to two pages to complete.

Here's an example of what you are expected to do:

 

 

MEMO

 

To: Your Instructor's Name

From: Your Name

Re: SILMAN ARTICLE ON THE PLAN TO SAVE FALLINGWATER

Date: October 10, 2001

As per your request, I have read the Robert Silman article which you passed along to me. A summary and analysis of the article follows.

Summary:

For the September 2000 issue of Scientific American, Robert Silman wrote a firsthand account of his engineering firm's plan to save Fallingwater. The southwestern Pennsylvania home, designed by famed architect Frank Lloyd Wright, was constructed in 1937.

Fallingwater has long been admired for its beauty, but beneath the appealing aesthetic there is a critical structural flaw. The problem is that there is not enough support for the portion of the house that projects over the stream; consequently, there is danger that the building will collapse. The engineering firm of Robert Silman Associates was hired to determine the cause of the problem and to propose a solution. Using a well-established formula for the construction of horizontal cantilever beams and accepted standards for the use of reinforced concrete, the engineers evaluated Fallingwater. With the advantage of computer technology not available when the house was built, the evaluation produced data which show that errors were made by the original engineers who tried to solve a problem involving excess load on support beams.

Once the cause of the problem was identified, the Silman engineers designed a plan to relieve the stresses on the cantilever beams through the use of post-tensioning. The repairs are scheduled to take place during the winter of 2001-02. The engineers are convinced that the strengthening of Fallingwater's cantilever beams will guarantee the structural stability of the house.


Analysis:

Silman's article has specific connections to Joel Arthur Barker's Defining a Paradigm. Barker wrote about paradigms and paradigm shifts, noting that awareness of these concepts helps people solve problems. When Fallingwater was built, an established paradigm relating to load distribution on support beams was ignored or forgotten. It was not a matter of the existing paradigm being no longer of use. It was, in Barker's words, a failure "to behave inside the boundaries in order to be successful." The established model would have worked just fine. As engineers know, the formula used to measure load distribution now is the same formula that was the standard when Fallingwater was built.

A paradigm, Barker suggests, tells that there is a game and how it can be successfully played. As the Silman article shows, engineers who work within a paradigm are able to communicate with each other in an efficient manner --They know the "game" and its "rules". The original blueprints and calculations made when Fallingwater was being designed were easily read by the Silman engineers more than fifty years later. An evaluation of those original documents ended up showing that an error had been made. In effect, the rules were not followed. The planned repairs will use established models relating to post-tensioning to exert a positive bending moment on the cantilever beam that was not correctly built. This represents a return to the rules and and boundaries.

An advantage the Silman engineers had was computer technology. With this tool, the engineers realized that a paradigm shift, what Barker refers to as "a change to a new game, a new set of rules", was not needed. Error did not have to occur. While Barker notes the importance of watching "for people messing with the rules," just messing with those rules isn't automatically the best decision. Engineers can learn the following from Barker's article: study the paradigms of the profession, work carefully, use the best available tools, and ask questions when there is not a convincing argument for not following an established paradigm.

I believe the article would be of interest to other new engineers in the office and recommend that they read it. If you concur, I can have copies distributed. Please advise.

 

 

 

See Grading for further information about the Summary/Analysis memo assignment.

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Reading Responses

In the opening weeks of the semester you will be given articles to read. These will help you understand concepts relating to the course, think about topics for your projects, and provide opportunities to discuss the practice of engineering. For each reading, there is a corresponding "Response Form" to focus your thinking about the reading. That response form will be collected at the start of the class when the reading is to be discussed. Typically, there are four questions to answer. As you'll see, when everyone is prepared for class, class discussion can proceed very efficiently.

See Grading for further information about the responses to Assigned Readings.

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